I was thinking,
Maybe sinking,
On the edge of my bed,
I was dreaming,
Maybe screaming,
With a rain cloud overhead.

So if it’s my point,
That I’m afraid you’ll lose me,
Then is it your point,
That you’ll never leave me,
Even if I cry so much,
That I now create my own sea?

Because together we could create,
A world all of our own.
I’ve already got the ocean and it’s tide,
The rain clouds overblown,
I just need your blue skies not to hide,
And the Light that you have shown.

We could let the birds sing their own song,
The squirrels play all day long.
We could watch the fish swim back and forth,
Chase the ducks back to the north,
Help the newborn critters not to fall,
Pray to God in thanks for all.

I was thinking,
Maybe too much,
About the things I miss the most.
I was dreaming,
Maybe too long,
About the things we used to do…

About Robin Elizabeth

My name is Robin Elizabeth and I'm 25. I do not create with my own ability, but with the gift God has given me.

25 responses »

  1. Jingle says:

    what a beautiful flow…
    love the way you rhyme,

    extraordinary rhythms…

  2. Jingle says:

    Glad to see you in…

  3. I read your poem twice. It has such a bond between the two lovers, the agreements they are about to make to each other. Nice.

  4. Maybe writing,
    Even Reciting
    Isnt this exciting
    Your works are Memorizing

    Keep it up, your friendly neighborhood shoeless guy 😀

  5. There’s a certain sadness to this poem, but combined with lovely memories.

  6. Bodhirose says:

    Sad and yearning for something that was. Beautiful job…

  7. Someone Is Special says:

    I was thinking
    What should I be penning
    On this rhyming
    Poem I was dreaming
    atlast I commented a loving
    thoughts for this rhymming poem

    Rhyming Waters

    –Someone Is Special–

  8. Chris G. says:

    There is a sadness here, but also a bond–beautiful stuff, with some lovely rhymes as well.

  9. dancingfreak says:

    a very beautiful poem 🙂

    i can really understand how you feel. still experiencing it all 🙂

    it’s a beautiful feeling acc to me still 😛

    your emotions are wonderfully portrayed 🙂

  10. Sina Saberi : The Blog says:

    daaaaamn what a flow

  11. beautiful.. the word doesn’t sum up what I feel, but still, it is descriptive 😀 thanks for sharing!

    Rally Week 29, My Poem

  12. really, really beautiful. loved the way you flitted between different styles in this 🙂

  13. r0013 says:

    Excellent write, I loved reading this piece. I like your structure!

  14. PinkLady says:

    this is a beautiful piece. you write so well. welcome to jingle’s community. =)

    thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a nice comment. i really appreciate it.

  15. dhitzunako says:

    Love the way you make connection between the first and the last part.
    And rhymes! I wish I could rhyme as good as you do in this poem.

    Keep writing. 🙂

  16. dan says:

    A beautiful poem– yearning for what once was, not satisfied with what is, but wishing for what could be. A sadness squeezed between time frames. Rain clouds, sea, ocean–very descriptive of the depth of emotion. Well done.

  17. vivinfrance says:

    A lovely poem. I particularly like the final stanza.

  18. hindawy says:

    I like it x 1000 🙂

    Keep it up 🙂

  19. Jingle says:

    hope that you find time visiting poets who are here…
    Happy Friday!

  20. 2zpoint says:

    Wanting…almost like wanting a square peg to go through a round hole but a little communication could save so much pain from this thought.

  21. I am glad you said that =D

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