The current runs.
Pushing through.
The coolness stuns.
It’s flow askew.

A pretty blue.
The water’s flow.
The river grew.
Shall undergo.

Now letting go.
The current falls.
Watch it grow,
Past it’s walls.

Shall never die;
The river’s cry.

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About Robin Elizabeth

My name is Robin Elizabeth and I'm 21. I do not create with my own ability, but with the gift God has given me.

25 responses »

  1. Jingle says:

    river’s cry, shall never die…
    lovely rhythms and fun verse.
    Cheers!

  2. Jamie Dedes says:

    A fun little homage to river. Nice! Made me smile. (Appreciate that. Thank you.)

    Another of mine potluck poems is here:
    http://wp.me/pne74-3Hf

    Poem on …

  3. buttercup600 says:

    Felt so warm and made me smile too. Hugs xx

  4. Took me directly to the river bank as it lulls me to peace. Has a warming feeling.

    here’s my entry: http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/can-you-stand-jingles-thursday-poetry-rally-week-30/

  5. siubhan says:

    i’m partial to river-themes 🙂 and this one flows particularly well. very nice.

  6. notjeffery says:

    I absolutely love your poetry.
    Every one that I have read today has affected me in a different way.
    You have truly been blessed with a natural writing gift.
    Thank you for starting a blog!

    Peace to you and yours,

  7. pollutedpoet says:

    good use of personification

  8. Lovely and perfectly written!

  9. woih says:

    I felt freezing waters…

    good write.

  10. Lu Ann says:

    Like tears!

    Beautiful!!

  11. PinkLady says:

    nice tribute to one of nature’s wonders. what a brilliant piece! thanks for sharing. 🙂

  12. vivinfrance says:

    The insistent rhyme works well in this poem. Thank you.

  13. Shashi says:

    The last lines were so powerfully expressive.. I liked this one.. thanks for sharing…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
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  14. The poetic form is the perfect choice! You created a flow with amazing depth!

    Fantastic Rally post! Thanks for coming by my blog and for your comments! I am grateful
    to have the opportunity to connect with you once again!

  15. fiveloaf says:

    i am beginning to enjoy all these little little meaningful poems like yours and i kinda write in the same style..

  16. marisol4you says:

    Superb. Nice rhythm, nice flow, simple topic.

  17. dancingfreak says:

    and u are so write about that 🙂

    river is a beautiful thing

  18. amazing.. this is one lovely sonnet, Robin! 🙂 flow, wordplay.. just perfect!

    my rally poem is here:
    http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/night-nuances/

  19. -D says:

    nice rhythm. 🙂

  20. NotATameLion says:

    The last couplet MADE this poem for me. I read it several times over and loved those lines more each time.

    Thank you for the poem.

    My rally poem: http://notatameblog.wordpress.com/2010/10/06/for-tu-fu/

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  22. potenzmittel says:

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    Reader.

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